Not tryna be a critic but your not going wit tha beat homie, this would sound sooo much better on a slower beat that goes with ur flow, just tryna give sum advice I wanna see people succeed
I want to collab w 2 really good girl singer and 2 good guy rapper/ singer hmu ASAPโ๏ธIโll respond to the ones I think is best๐ช๐พ๐ช๐พ๐ฅ๐๐พ