bru..... you went hard my niggy!! Only thing I would say in my opinion... is just putting more emotion when you rapping , you feel me. like when you spit let them hear your character and your heart. I mean this is just my opinion bru, I'm just tryna help a fellow rapper that's all. But if you had that emotional expression man it would be perfect Bru.. your lyrics are good and your rythem is as well. God bless you brotha.