Killed it! I'm a brand new Rapper, my name is D-BOY EASY and I barley started learning rap about a week ago. Anyways I put out my first track earlier tonight and I would appreciate it If you would listen to it and analyze it and I'm also open to criticism, you won't hurt my feelings. I didn't even know how to count bars until yesterday. I'm brand new, I don't know shit but I feel with hard work that I can do something. My song is called Change #Fire🔥 please check it out and comment. I feel I did pretty good considering I don't know shit. I need rappers like you to judge me and see if you can see potential.
Du Rag jutsu.
Yet another beat for me to chew through.
Give em what they didn’t know I had.
Luke it’s papa, you ain’t know ya dad.
Sky walker moon walk then dab.
Force be with me,
My hair look Red like I’m porkin Kitty.
Four men (Forman) couldn’t even spit this witty.
Pitty on a rapper talkin iffy.
Hit me talking bout,
When you make it out,
Promise that you won’t forget me.
Tipsy Sos’ like: I got you niggy.
None of that’s my problem really.
Heads ain’t ready, You don’t know the half.
My cup of soda steady owed a splash.
Of rum I’m dumb lit never close to trashed.
Lacking on that inspiration lately.
Patience vacant like it was when I wrote “pacing.”
Spacing in and out,
I need empty house.
I need mamacita up in Fendi now.
I need S-O-S up in trending now.
Once you rode the bike, no forgetting how.
Look Mah, no hands, still control the whole span.
Forever forsaken to frivolous fans.
They only ride waves like what’s under du rag.
They only ride waves like what’s under du rag.
Really it’s sad...
The most dubious newby is back.