You should learn more about the trials and tribulations of a people before you create a story. You yourself are the one being tested brother. The religious authority should be the only one providing testimonial expression. Your story is borderline blasphemous due to the nature of its involvement. Anything linked to lucifer is a product of corruption, therefore a story depicting your own interpretation of the our Lords given testimonial expression is far more deceitful then heavenly. Your song was well done brother, but I feel it is my purpose to let people know when lucifer speaks. I see your intentions an believe you try to speak light, just always remember the devil brings light thru artists.
God bless you